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  • Dor

    Bez sumnje, naoko jednostavan haiku, a u biti je slojevit. Svatko se prihvaća rizika ako se bude pitao što je njime htjela autorica poručiti. Prema tome, odgovor ću pokušati pronaći uglavnom u samom sebi. Prije bih, ipak, ustvrdio da je izuzetno plastično sazdan. Mislen je i smišljen vrhunski! Barem po meni. U vrtu crvi, rujući, revno obavljaju svoj posao ...; doskočica je, međutim, u čujnosti im tog čina, i to isključivo zahvaljujući prisutnosti djevojčice na krovu do koje sve to dopire kao .... (Predajem se, ipak ne bih dalje!)

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    12.05.2007. (05:05)    -   -   -   -  

  • Y

    Mi sembrava sempre che mia zia fosse un po' speciale...

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    12.05.2007. (11:38)    -   -   -   -  

  • pifs

    Love this one, although you know my mind is not adapted to fully appreciate the concept of
    haiku as a way of living ones life (yet, maybe, you would argue! ); the moment I saw and read this one I heard too all the sounds and felt the calm that I know one feels up there looking at the mountains and feeling the earth. Lovely stuff. Actually one would like to see it in
    a haiku childrens story; yes, how about making your photo-haikus into a real story-book
    for kids, ... oops, before I go on I guess its been done before. But I just see it as part
    of a haiku bugs story or something similar. Awaiting more and I cannot wait to be
    in that same spot soon! Best haikist ever, to my mummy!

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    19.05.2007. (06:44)    -   -   -   -  

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